SUUUSAN. This is gorgeous. I agree that it has a bit of an unfinished feel, but that's mostly in the transistions. The ending is great (the Doctor! Of course!).
I love the comment to Merlin about how they are all sinking, and one day they will have no where to go but up. Beautiful thought, and very freeing. Also, you compared Susan to Morgana, which is funny because I do think they are very similar in more ways than one - which actually gives me an idea. (Susan. Nightmares in Narnia that are more than just dreams. Huzzah.)
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Date: 2010-04-08 05:08 am (UTC)This is gorgeous. I agree that it has a bit of an unfinished feel, but that's mostly in the transistions. The ending is great (the Doctor! Of course!).
I love the comment to Merlin about how they are all sinking, and one day they will have no where to go but up. Beautiful thought, and very freeing.
Also, you compared Susan to Morgana, which is funny because I do think they are very similar in more ways than one - which actually gives me an idea. (Susan. Nightmares in Narnia that are more than just dreams. Huzzah.)
Wonderful, and I do hope you expand on this!